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I was given feedback for my first script draft. The feedback was incredibly useful, and helped me improve my script. Some of my feedback suggested that when I set up a character, I should describe them a bit more to get a better sense of who the character is. Something I didn't realise I was doing, was missing out full stops and other things like question marks very occasionally. My feedback just reminded me that i was missing these things. Realising the small grammatical errors can be a big help. One small missing full stop can make an entire part of the story not make sense. I was also told that some of my format was a bit wrong. Characters talking and action lines were fine, but when I used certain tools and techniques, I would use them in a wrong way or have them on the wrong line. Once I fixed it up, it made it look a whole lot neater and more correct.

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